We did them after we looked at Dog Poem, by Laura Ranger.
Can you find heaps of similes?
Here are five of our poems.
Dog Poem
Her eyes are as big
as soccer balls.
Her legs are as long
as a pole.
Her tail is as fluffy
as a pillow.
Her nose is as small
as a tennis ball.
And...
Her body is as smooth
as a blanket. Winiata
Cat Poem
She is like a cute
She is like a cute
soft pillow.
Her neck is like
a fluffy cloud.
Her tail is like
a stripy spear.
Her eyes are as green
as greenstone.
as greenstone.
Her paws are as soft
as a bunny. Turoa
Cat Poem
Her nose is like
a fluffy hair ball.
Her tail is as long
as a smooth piece of rope.
Her eyes are big
as a giant shiny eye. Alyssa
Dog Poem
Skyler jumps
like a rabbit.
She is like
a hairy cushion.
She is fat
like a piece of paper.
I like my dog. Sam
Dog Poem
His tail looks
like a mouse.
His eyes look
like fluff.
His body is as smooth
as a pair of black pants.
His legs are skinny
like a pencil.
Hayden
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