Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Writing - "Show not Tell"

We have been using "Show not tell" to bring our writing alive for you readers.
Here are some examples of our work,and there are more on our classroom walls!

Happiness
“Whoo!  Whoo!   Thanks Nana, thanks for this awesome BMG scooter!” I screamed loudly.
I threw my hands up in the air and I screamed, “Whoo!  Whoo!”
Ryan

Scared
The lights went out.  I was trembling. 
The shadow of my cupboard looked like a monster.  The drawers looked like a smiley face.
Alexander

Happiness
When I first saw Gizmo I screamed!  I told Mum I wanted him.

Kaila

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